by demure101
A really good job Demure, A really pleasant story that could easily be fact and which is a pleasure to read. The pub scene was definitely a keeper totally believable, a typically Welsh pub with the fireplace in the bar and quiet enough to read. Brings back lots of memories Definitely a 5. Keep it up,
then its arranged, some times by magic doll. TK U MLJ LV NV
I saw that line that you borrowed from the play ! *smiles* I honestly love your work, Demure! What a grand story this is -- wonderfully realized, happily concluded. Hal is a love, and Karen is a lucky woman! The story is so real -- one almost feels as if one knows these people! Well done! :)
Your pseudonym here suits your work to a T. It's demure, but definitely not lacking in passion.
somehow it will find its way to where it is supposed to be, TK U MLJ LV NV
Wonderful. Sometimes if you’re not looking for Love, Love looks for you.
And when it does, here is hoping you know it when it does.
Thank goodness for Liz