All Comments on 'You Got the Part! Ch. 02'

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Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgalmost 11 years ago
Its A Really Cute Story...

...And Riley's growing on me! Your writing is really improving, still a minor glitch or two (the 'bathroom had a bathroom' stumped me, thought it was some kind of joke for a second there). But its a good storyline and I like where you are going with it. Thanks for sharing Riley with us, can't wait for the next chapter!

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