All Comments on 'You Have No Right to Ask Me That Ch. 03'

i like your story please continue

Please dont let us wait 7 months for the next part!!

please dont have us waiting too long.....get working on the next chapter as soon as possible............great writing so far by the way.........love an love you.

please please please continue!! this is great. can't wait to read the next chapter make it soon please :)

yay your back please continue asap

I'm really loving this story so far - the intrigue, the mystery (maybe I'm getting carried away), but it is very well written and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm glad there was a new chapter, I would love to read move please contuie the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story, its really pulls you in. But please....pretty, pretty please continue ur story and soon....

please bring out more and at a few pages length , soon

how long do i have to wait for the rest...plz hurry..:)

You need to quit playing around and finish this. I want to know what's going to happen next. Talk about a cliff hanger. lol.

Really would like the rest of the story please!!!!!!!!!!! this Is a very well writen story would love to read the rest so please hurry and finsh it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm intrigued! Your writing is solid... more please, and pronto!

I really like this sorry so far, so please submit soon :D

Please do continue, its quite grand.

Exquisite(: Really looking forward to see what's going to happen next. The suspense is wonderfully riveting. Can't wait to read piece four. ~P

Love this story, please continue it.

i cant wait to read the next chapter!! im stuck in the suspense of it all

Love your story and can't wait to read more!

Where is the rest? This is just getting to good. Please continue, I think it is very well written!

still dont have a clue

What the Hell is this story about and why are you not really telling it????????????????????? I can see why you abandon it because it is confusing and a total waste of time to read, don't come back to it until you can tell a proper story or know where the hell it is suppose to be going, i am sorry i wasted any of my time trying to figure out the point of the nonsensical dribble, stick to your day job and by the way it was not longer, one page is not long!!!

not sure what's wrong with the anon below. I loved reading this story and wished there was more. this probably won't be seen but if it is, another vote for the continue please column!

This story is developing really slow, I wish the chapters would be a bit longer. Otherwise, it's a good story.

I cant wait to see what happens next. Please continue.

please write more, and try to include new info a little faster in places. it gets quite irritating at times.

I wish authors would put something in here indicating that their stories are on hold or abandoned. So irritating to find a great story that never gets finished.

Flipping through random stories I happened upon this one it's pretty dang good so far but appears to be left to die a slow aganizing death. Let us know if you ever an to finish or if it's done please

But I share Anyone's sentiments on great stories being left halfway done. Highly hope that it's just lack of interest and nothing serious happened to the writer to make things be left unfinished.

shame this wasn't continued.

Three full chapters about “two friends working through their secrets” yet not one single secret of either man was even introduced let alone worked through. Just a lot of nothing that was confusing and disconnected. All we know is the they are hiding secrets, they had an argument, Shaine got wasted for days, James busted through the door and cut his foot on broken glass. And they both dislike hospitals. Then the story is abandoned. Wtf!!