All Comments on 'You Have the Best Toys'

I liked the general tone and the way Mike played with her. It did seem a bit rushed, not allowing the reader to revel in the sensations the way Shelly did. I think it was a bit unrealistic that he was able to insert the butt plug and tie her up in her sleep, but the surprise element makes for an interesting concept.

Keep at it, and we can expect great things from you.

Appreciate the feedback.

Someone else commented on the lack of reality, and I've edited it. I hope that the edited version will be posted soon.

I'll have to think about the pacing. Thanks for reading and please keep checking back!

(Its my first story, so I'm still trying to work with the system for comments and stuff. I rated it a 4 because I don't want to rig the ratings.)