All Comments on 'You Know that This ain't Right Ch. 02'

Really? 11 1/2 penis? OMG you guys are so hung up on size. I'm not an English teacher but that's gone ridiculously long run on paragraph. Get a proof reader and use him/her!!!! BARF

Lost interest at 11.5 inch! Get real!

Cows are all you would be doing!

Why does everyone have to exaggerate there dick size? 11.5 in get fucking real, totally lost interest.

It is obvious that you have strange fantasies and that you enjoy telling your friends about them over a six-pack while sitting on the tailgate of your pickup truck. But, before telling the rest of us about them, please learn the writers' craft.

I'm afraid this didn't even get a tingle from my loins.

And you are NEVER going to make it as a writer. Your language sucks, your grammar (please note, that's grammar, not grandma!) sucks, and your story is really pathetic.

You should have paid more attention in English class.

Oh, and please don't post more of this - that was 2 minutes of my life gone forever, wasted...