All Comments on 'You never know Ch. 01'

by Chebeba

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Very good story but you ....

.... mixed up some words.

For instance, "She takes the queue, just as I hoped ..." should have been "She takes the cue, just as I hoped"

a) 'queue' - a line of people,

b) 'cue' - A thing said or done that serves as a signal to an actor or other performer to enter or to begin their speech or performance

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
The kid and I...

Not me and the kid. There are many others. You should consider an editor.

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