All Comments on 'You Talk Too Much'

You have an amazing talent as a writer. And, of course, excellent taste in subjects. ;-)

I like where you are going with it. Just Please keep the Romance Only between Loki and Laura. Great Touch, Loki has a Daughter LOL. The Next should be a BOY. Just a Hint, mean a thought. NOT,LOL.

I plan on keeping the story on Loki and Laura. :) I'm just thinking of burger joint for lunch with Loki Laura and Abby where they have a juke box.,. Ooooohhhh. I think I have a few thoughts gathering now. Thanks for the comment I love hearing them and they give me great deals of inspiration and joy knowing I was able to write something you enjoy. Keep the comments coming! Gwenannette

I want more stories with Loki and Laura<3 How about a story where they are married and lives on a farm with their daughter and a newborn son? I would love that=)

// Carrie

More Please! <3

This is brilliant, and I'd really love to read more of your writing, and not just about Laura and Loki. Your writing style is easy to read, and highly erotic. The romance is also another big win. Well done.