All Comments on 'You Win Some, You Lose Some'

I liked that you took pleanty of time to develop the story, and that it was sensitively told, and was still very sexual.

Well developed and understated story. Loved the touches, and the development of Denissa's confidence. The sex was well versed, but so much more sensual because of the development.

Realistic, emotional, sexy. I'd hesitated about starting such a long story, but the anticipation made it so much sweeter. Very effective watching Denissa's blossoming and change in attitude, and I love the mentor angle.

I appreciate you taking the time to develop such a great story instead of bailing out for a quick ending. I savored each chapter and purpously read it in 3 sessions rather than all at once.

Very erotic. Please continue. I would like to see Andy join in the fun.

Most stories written in "I" fall way short on painting the story. They tell you what "I" did. You did a very good job of holding it together with out the heavy handed I...I...I...etc.

So erotic yet so tender, thank you for taking the time and making the effort to write such a great story.

Growth, acceptance and wife sharing...little did I know that schlepping out an unfaithful whore is growth. I've always found it hard to imagine wife sharing as anything other than the immature act of animals sorely lacking in self respect and dignity, but hey, if sharing the wife with just one person is "growth," what is it with multiple partners? If she charges for the "service," does it count as "financial growth?" Cancer is also a progressive growth, yet I don't see people lining up for that one. The author has successfully written a story about how NOT to conduct oneself in a relationship...here's hoping that was the intent!

Having been the extra male to more than one couple, this well written story could easily be based on fact.

My first encounter in a MMF, was also theirs.

I am not a wealthy published author, but I found a couple who wanted to extend their boundaries. The growth in confidence of your female lead mirrored my personal experience with this couple. As in this story, it was a wonderful experience that was more than just sex.

Thank you for putting in words a story that returns me to the first time I was invited to share a strong and stable relationship.

This was a great read. We all know it is fiction mixed with fact, but your way of bringing it to words is fantastic... Thanks... How about a followup story with Andy and a visit to Nissa's home?

I grew up watching my older sister get fucked,&loved it,I would watch\them do it as often as I could.when I met the wonderful women I would marey,I knew that I would want to see another man fuck her.we talked about it,& she was eager to let my best friend fuck her.I almost had a hart atack,watching him stuf his big cock into her .

wonderful story,brings back fond memories

I'm stunned that there are only 12 comments to this story. Given the subject matter, it does not surprise me that there are both those who loved it and those who hated it. As for myself, I loved it and will explore all of this author's writings on this site.

Good flow, a lot of detail, but very little was superfluous to developing the story line. Clever methods were used to influence the PoV while making it clear whose story it is.

Only quibble is the ending with Andy's call - the coincidence stretched credulity WAY too far. HE shoulda called HER! Understand the 'she has to work it out for herself' issue, but it could have been cast as a 'just want to remind you that I still love you' call!

5*

Great! I like the way you built the characters and setting. Just the right amount of description of physical details and lust. Keep writing!

. . . is a perfect number. In this case each person learned from the other two, that's as it should be in an ideal situation. Well done as a story, maybe Denissa "grew up" just a little too quickly. That is one of the short comings of the genre, not the author. Passage of time with enough experiences to justify the growth turn a short story into a multi book novel.

Good job.

In spite of my dislike for the ménage a trois as a dynamic, and my abject disagreement that such strengthens a marriage, you present the scenario so well and with respect and even tenderness that goes missing in most writing on this site.

I actually got into the threesome and enjoyed it. Would have appreciated it a bit more if Den had ramped up to 'hooker hot' a little more evenly and slowly, but understand the time constraints and have seen things accelerate when experimenters realize that time is short.

Too often the urgency proves catastrophic to the relationship and it all goes to hell.

Your style is welcoming and generous.

I hope you try a variety of offerings, as I'm sure I will enjoy reading them!

4*, only because the topic is difficult for me, but also because you handled it so well (I would normally be so put off topically, as to give 2*).

One of the best stories I ever read on Literotica. Definitely top 5 (the other four I still have to find)

Well written about a difficult subject, wife sharing attracts a lot of condemnation here but isn't it just another fetish.

Cuckolds make up less than 1% of the male population. Why are you writing stories for such a small audience? Most men don't want to share their wives because they don't want to get Herpes and HPV which are permanent STDs.

That was HOT!

You write pure unadulterated garbage. My opinion

Thanks, Max !

I very much enjoyed the story. Background narrative was well done vs. boring or overly sexual and the final sex session was spot on for my tastes and inclinations.

Your characters were nicely human and it felt like everyone came away with a great experience. Looking forward to more.

MrMixPlix

Enjoyable. At times confusing but effectively developed. Any other stories?