All Comments on 'Young & Divorced Ch. 01 - New Hope'

I would hope there will be a part two.

Thanks! Yes, I've already written part 2. This one was a bit slower due to laying groundwork for charachters in a series. It picks up in Chapter 2.

Alexis, the bartender, gave Brian good advice. Women like Carla often take advantage of guys that have recently divorced or broken up.

Well done...hooked here!

It's areola, not aureola.

No way would he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

Arrow - thanks!

Acup - typo. Oops.

Anonymous - No he wouldn't, because she didn't give consent to that and he's not an asshole.

Hope she doesn't turn out to be a prostitute; but even if she's not, this is a rebound and they never work out.

His friends paid her in advance for everything, but she did stuff up not having condoms on her. Obviously just an amateur pro.

Good start a series with real potential.

Took me a year before I dated. If it's bad at nearly 30 try getting out there again at 45!!

Married over 20 years.

Don't know the rules, not even sure if I am playing golf or water polo!!

A few nice dinner dates in between relationships.

My first attempt was a 6 week disaster. She liked to "fix up" her men. I was just coming out of 20 years of doing everything to please someone else.

I then went for the exotic (Chinese) 18 months of fun but our outlooks were just too different.

Then a South American. Again 18 months of fun. I really liked her but again, we were literally, going in different directions.

Still trying to figure out the game. The rules seem to change every match. Been on the bench a while now.

Maybe I should take up tiddlywinks!! 😊

Looking forward to following this up.

I wondered at first if she was on the take, until she gently ended the first encounter. The birthday date was great, can't fault him for not having a condom, he wasn't to know it would end in a good rollicking romp, wasn't sure if he was ready to get his dick wet after what he'd been through. On to part 2 :)