All Comments on 'Young Blood Ch. 02'

How could you NOT have gotten much feedback from the first chapter? Your stories on this site are some of the most well-written, well thought-out, and enticing ones on here! I've always enjoyed all your other stories that you've contributed here, but this one looks much more promising than the rest ;)

Keep at it!

Hey-

Great story you have going here so far! My only suggestion would be to slow down the sex scenes. They're nice, but a little generic compaired to the time it seems you've put into everything else.

Sati (NSI)

im looking forward to see if you write a 3rd chapter to this,im already hooked on the first 2.

Can't wait for next one.

loved 'em!i can't wait to read the next one!

fucking loved it PLZ keep em coming

I'm loving this vampire story series. It's so exciting! But it would be way sexier if you didn't use silly words like "snatch" and "rod" and "meat" hahah.Can't wait to read the rest!!

loves it!

A very well written story with an excellent plot and excellent character development. It is sad that the writer never wrote the 3rd part of this excellent series "Queen of Darkness". He stated he was going to write a 3rd series at the end of "Electra Rose" story. I do not know why so many writers on this site NEVER finish their stories. It is very frustrating to the readers of this site that so many writers choose not to finish their stories. I can not understand why a writer writes multiple chapters of a story and up and not finish the story. Retired Army NCO

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