All Comments on 'Young Finds Desire For Old'

just getting good and .......

One desperately needed here! Story seems good but with the grammar mistakes is doesn't flow well at all. Please consider asking for help. Editors here are free & we love to help.

Keep up the good work!

being a lesbian myself that was amazing!!!

Is there more? it was just getting good!

It's criminal that this super hot story ended just as it was getting good. I know it's a long shot, but a sequel to this hot piece of work *MUST* happen!

Awesome writing! If this story was based on a true situation, you are there best ever!