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SomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 11 years agoSome people just aren't cut out to write erotica.
You're simply not a very good author. The story was not especially interesting, and the actual writing was executed pretty badly. Stick with reading, and stay away from writing.
Anonymousover 11 years agoCorrect
Previous comments are spot-on. Why bother writing something that is so short and so non-erotic?
Fail.
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