All Comments on 'Young Wife at Club'

read better but try hard

The next time you have an incest tale, get the brother to come home with them and get the husband and brother to give the wife some double penetration, with her waking up to find her brother's cock in her pussy and her husband's cock in her asshole.

Spell check, son!

i do like this story probably as i do exactly the same with my wife when i get her drunk.

But it was too short and you could have included a lot more detail, also as she was that drunk you could have allowed all the people you mention to do a lot more to her.

Also you seemed to have forgotten to take your wifes brother home

Raping an intoxicated woman by husband brother or bar attendant is still Rape and is a crime.

I think non-consent/reluctance might be a better category for this tale. There was the brother aspect but it seemed like kind of a side note.

I like the other posters idea about her waking up with her brother fucking her, though I think it would be better if the husband were only watching and having second thoughts.

....the kernel of erotica is elusive..write more.......when reading becomes deciphering much is lost...

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! FANTASTIC!!!

very good i love do things like that with drunk girlfriends

Seriously? My third grade granddaughter can spell better.

You need a proof reader. A story with so many errors is not fun nor easy to read.6AdTaw

The amount of people commenting that they do this irl is disgusting. Glad to distinguish the rapists in the group. Filth.

There seems to be a lot of English teachers grading this story. I don't think most people reading this are here to correct others grammar.

I dislike stories with taking advantage of someone who is passed out. Having reduced inhibitions from drinking is one thing, but when you're passed out that is not right. I also must say that this story is very poorly written, full of poor grammar, misspelling and choppy sentences.