All Comments on 'Younger Sister Ch. 03'

... get a bit puzzling when you leave words out!

Example - "We headed out, letting Barb I would be a couple hours."

Letting Barb what??

Try proof reading your story to check if it actually makes sense!

The previous commentor was correct; you do need to proof your stories or get an editor. However, you do have a good story going, and I would like to see it continue. He at some point, now needs to take mother and daughter together, even if there is some initial reluctance.

Good basic story, but use an editor.

Cheats on wife with sister then cheats on sister and wife with niece.. this guy is worthless.