All Comments on 'Your Best Friends Flower'

Fancy words that convey the exact definition you're looking for are nice and all but they interrupt the flow of the story. Even the words I knew off hand interrupted the flow, especially considering they didn't seem to fit in with the story about a party animal type character. When in doubt its always better to KISS (keep it simple, stupid).

The metaphors and fancy descriptions are nice. But if that is all there is, it gets boring. It would have been a lot better with more dialogue.

Completely sucks. Too many fancy words that try to give "art" to a pointless story. You surely have a lot of qualities, but writing clearly isn't one of them.