by Lemonesque
There's noncon that makes you want to call the Crime-stoppers tip line. Congrats. You wrote a winner. First person pov makes it a challenge to avoid the trap of 'I this' and 'I that' and 'I, I, I, me, me, me.' The story does get right up against that cliff. Then again, for this tale it does tend to reinforce the narcissism of the guy.
Let's see more. I wanted this to go on...where he fucked his wife (in the ass?) as well.
Good job, short and to the point. Real NonCon which I truly appreciate. None of that whole - she didn't want to but then it was the best thing she ever had and just went with it - bullshit.
I also like the ending. Of course she gets pregnant! That's what happens when you cum inside a fertile person, they get pregnant - they don't have a magical vagina that somehow repels impregnating sperm and everything is ok - no, it's not ok, pregnancy happens!
Well done! Just make it a little longer next time and maybe a little more descriptive. Still, very nice.
Let's hear some more.
Very well written. I enjoyed it. Although curious about the photocopying haha. Curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back, ne?
So another child is born to a single mother, working several jobs to survive and care for a fatherless child, who will most probably end up delinquent, doing drugs, stealing cars and mugging old ladies and ultimately one more in the already overcrowded prison system.
there is just one tiny detail you missed:
you wrote "I tied a hand or foot to each table leg, then gagged her too." and then she was talking to the guy - would be quite difficult gagged:-)
Nevertheless I gave you 5*, I enjoyed the story. Keep up the good work.
Rape is a crime!!!. Not funny! Not sexy! Not pretty! A crime and anyone who rapes is a sick bastard!
Anyone ever wonder why the world is in a fucked up state right now? Read this story!