All Comments on 'Your Journey Starts on Sir's Desk'

by rjhm

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

I'm working at the wrong place.

The POV and sparseness of dialogue both work well. The feeling of being a voyeur is strong... and... enjoyable. ;)

eaglejet1eaglejet1over 10 years ago

WOW! That was one hot story. I totally enjoyed, maybe just a little too much though. I need to get a job at a place like that!! Thank you for sharing this hot gem!!

MaynessMaynessover 10 years ago

Hot office scene, would love to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!!

I would love to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Oh my... Very hot and erotic. I look forward to reading the next installment.

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