All Comments on 'Your Love Is My Ticket'

by MoonlightRumRat

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DCxMileyCyrusDCxMileyCyrusover 11 years ago

Dont know what you were so worried about man, that was one of the best stories Ive ever read! : ) Could you possibly do one about Zendaya?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Great one bro. Hi knew kesha could get me do hard?!?

MikefromAZMikefromAZover 11 years ago
Good Story

I happen to like the story. I rated it a 5 but I haven't seen your other work to know what was missing. Personally it was left open in the right way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

A lot of fun to read. Kind of edgy compared to some stuff on here but it felt in fitting with the way I imagine Kesha to be. Keep it up.

MoonlightRumRatMoonlightRumRatover 11 years agoAuthor
THANKS!!

Honestly, thanks everyone. Your kind words literally put a smile on my face. Glad you all liked it. I'll definitely be working on something new as soon as I can. Hopefully being back to school doesn't take up much of my time.

@DCxMileyCyrus: I honestly didn't know who Zendaya was, but she's too young for a story, sorry. There's definitely a few Disney/Nick girls I wouldn't mind writing about, but no promises as to when that story would be written.

MoonlightRumRatMoonlightRumRatover 11 years agoAuthor
Errors

I also hate re-reading my stories and finding grammatical errors or missing words when I thought I found everything. Damn. I'll get better.

SammycoltoSammycoltoover 11 years ago
I liked it!

I'm a pretty new author, too, so I can understand you want to have as much feedback as possible to see how your writing style comes across to the readers. I must say that Ke$ha is an interesting choice because... she isn't exactly a sex symbol. But you really made it work, I thought it was a really hot story. I read your Kate-Upton-story, too and liked it, but found it way too short. So your style is awesome and if you keep the stories at least two pages long they are excellent. Looking forward to read more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I love Ke$ha, and I love her music, and I really like this story. Really well written, especially for the celebrity section.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Nice story...good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please

Please continue this story

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