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All Comments on 'Your Turn'

by PaulSandarac

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
long turn

An enjoyable story. Long, break it into chapters. What happened to Vanessa? Ithink you could continue the sorry at school.or at home during the summer. You may also have a story line with the swinging parents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good, but

I also want to know what happened to Vanessa. I hope the poor girl didn't just get left like that before going off to university!

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