All Comments on 'Your Turn'

I loved this entire story ... thank you, very much.

Yeah, a decent four!

Very hot. Really sets one to thinking about past experiences!

One of the best I have ever read. Just got caught up in it, and was swept away. I love the honesty of the characters, and how freely they share the most intimate detail of their lives. Your writing brings the story and characters to life. Not only does it make a hook up that end with proposal believable; it sequels about them building a family and a long, happy life together. Of course that life may involve occasional get togethers with Robin and David or Paul and Sarah, or maybe one big gathering. Sorry for rambling, thank you writing one of my all time favorites!

Another great conversation.

You bring everything to life. Outstanding and sooooo erotic. Makes me want to cum. One more to read and I can't wait!

I want that so bad now ,hope you don't go into advertising

I would go broke buying what your selling.

So good. No I should say ,so great you keep writhing and I'll

Keep reading .

I please tell me you are female queen size and available

It would be great to hear these in person haha

having two characters describe doing it while they're doing it with each other. Imaginative, I must say--and erotic, too. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thank you all for your appreciative comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The title is because I give you 5 stars and would give you ten if I could. Outstanding. Wish I knew people like these two know. The lady, especially.

The special joy in your stories

is how your personality shines through.

What a sweetheart you are!

Excellent, natural-feeling dialogue.

Oh, I forgot to compliment you for the "combination" scene in the other story!

Lotsa fun!

WOW that's all I can say...

Great twist at the end. Very erotic. Loved it.