All Comments on 'Your Whole Life Flashes before You'

I really loved the mix of dialogues and action in the story. You know how to blend talking and action in a story. Great. Cheers.

Beautifully descriptive, but I disliked the end. Anna was a bitch

Very original, did not see that coming! Then as soon as she said "Simon's here," it all clicked. Poor sod, at least he had a nice memory right before the end.

Nice story dear. I liked that you written some words about condoms, that is, safe sex.

because... love is caring for the other one...

sincerely,

Elias

Really really odd ending. Honestly kinda sad. Well written sex but, jesus, was the ending really necessary?

Sad tale of woe , it was tragic even at its most sensuous ! Well written and powerfully delivered ! 5 from me