All Comments on 'Your Wish... Or Mine?'

I have tears in my eyes and a heavy broken heart, that this is somebodies sick and twisted view of BDSM, please resubmit it into noncon.

That's what I call "intense!"

whining, then deceit, then cruel disregard, then malicious,brutal abuse...

and then she "loves him".

this is not good bdsm fiction, it is pathetic inadequate projection

So far over the top that it's ridiculous. She, of course, divorced him. If you really loved someone, when she said "No" that would have been the end of it. If your family knew what you had done, they'd never talk to you again. You belong in jail. No stars for this horrible pile of crap. Never post again.

This is the exact same as a previous story of yours. Only in the other one it was the wife who dommed the husband rather than the husband domming the wife. You've literally just switched the names around and submitted it again.

And ugly, made even more so by the pretense of love. Far too Jekyll and Hyde. If she had loved him, surely that love must be dead now.

Many things may not be to my taste but rarely do I find something to be as vomit inducing as this. Your disclaimer is inadequate at best. I pray you do not actually try to participate in bdsm. The thought frightens. The thought of you in any relationship frightens me for the other person involved. Lit stories may be a place people feel they can let their inner fantasies run free, but some should not see the light of day even here.

God, this is almost total abuse.

I can appreciate that you wrote a story and had some fantasies and ideas that you thought were hot. This is my question to you, Brutalhawk: Was your character "Anne" treated like a human being? How was she treated like a human being?

Yes, you did have a warning to your story, so I have to accept the fact that I read your story even though there was a warning.

It just left a really bad taste in my mouth! Ruth seems like a devil of a person. Does Ruth have any redeeming qualities? Or is she just a pure bitch?

Abuse. Non consent. Bullying. Manipulation. Shall I go on? I'll let you on in a little secret ok no means no. From what it sounds like they aren't even in a D/s relationship so it's not like he can even "pull rank" (if you will). Hopefully she divorces him.