All Comments on 'You're in My Spot'

That's a very hot story!!

That was a very hot story .Great job enjoyed the read .Hope you do more like it.Thanks

Very hot. Would love to read more. Loved the characters. Nicely done!

Good read all the way thru.....love sis and mom stories

When I get to the end of the first page I usually check to see how many more pages there are, if it's more than 3 I usually stop reading as they often get boring. I didn't check until the end of the 3rd page but by then I was hooked, read it all and enjoyed it.

I'm a little confused that he didn't get it together with Mum after she sat on him and rubbed in the cream, they were both enjoying it and would obviously have done more if Cassie hadn't walked in. I felt it was blatantly obvious what Cassie was setting and almost expected him to say 'hello Mum' when he entered the room.

Nicely written, to the point that I didn't notice any mistakes if there are any.

Now about to check on your other stories

Thanks for sharing.

Tarnished only by your inclusion of the obligatory "how big is the penis?" factoid. And this one was measured! TOTALLY UNNECESSARY! ****

I myself love a good long story such as this that you can sink your teeth into and enjoy :-) :-) Great story and looking forward to reading your next one!

Very well done. Really enjoyed it. Love another story with these three soon.

Very hot and sexy. Thanks.

just loved it. perfect one...

Sitting here with a raging hard on, great story. Could it have been from a "real" mom/sis encounter ?

Story, I loved how it began with him eating his sister ther very first time totaly unplanded made it so much hotter, the first fuck is always hot being sister or mother.

Didn't say if sis and mom were on the pill, that could make things interesting.

Excellent story

Great story , riveting. Look forward to more good stuff from you. Would love to see a full blown threesome with Mom eating Sis while he takes her from behind and possibly a bit of anal play thrown in. Once again Well Done

That was absolutely superb. *****

I've been reading on this site for several years and I think this is the best I've seen!!! Very well done!

Superb one

i am still looking and can't find it anywhere !!!!!!

I love it!! Very alluring and hot!

Nicely done!

too much bullshit, not enough action.

Absolutely most engulfing story I have read so far!!!

Excellent and best in recent months

Too long and too boring.

Well done...took your time in the build up, but it made it that much better!!!

Really enjoyed this one, it is a story and not just sex scene after sex scene. Well done will look for more from you.

A very good, well written story

This is definitely a fun one thanks very much

One criticism I'd have is the choice of particular wording of what else could have been there and I'm sure everyone knows, but again a decent read nonetheless

its a beautiful thing when a son fills his mother with a huge load of cum!!!! ;-)

Each and every one of your stories are SO well written and thought out! It was extremely erotic and I love the humor! Thank you so much for sharing! Cheers Lance

Just enough backstory to make it interesting. Nicely done!

truely an amazing story

Loved it!!

Great story I think you should add another chapter 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Every time he says Meaty Pussy take a sip

What a great story, its all I wish I had done, I had four sisters who were beautiful and mum even better, I masterbated over them night after night, would have been great to follow it up, pity

I think he takes the cake for braindead, clueless, moron, retard, fool, dumbass and a few I cant think of off the top of my head, lol. How many times did I (FACEPALM), I dont know! Lol. They should have just tied him down and took turns on his ass instead of waiting on his clueless ass, rofl! Fun story though once you get past yelling at him every five minutes, hehehe.

Well written

This story really got the blood flowing! Great story keep up the good work!

A good read though very, very predictable on the story, would've been rather amusing to see him go to the other bedroom where his sister actually was and surprise her lol. Good story overall though despite that, though I do wish it had more action scenes, could've used at least 1-2 more with Cassie before the finale being that we had 6 pages. Finally I think you missed out on a better ending where you could've tied everything together by having something connected to the title again. Example: Cassie walks in on mom riding Danny and Cassie grins wickedly and says "you're in my spot". That, would've been 10/10 better ending imo but still good story ^.^ thanks for the read

Absolutely amazing & hot story..

Although I hope you know that it is strongly advised to unplug any electrical/electronic devices when there is thunder going on nearby. So, watching TV when thunder is literally shaking the building is kind of dumb.

Great story telling. I wouldn't consider myself the expert on taboo erotica, but I'm not new to these stories either and I think this story sets itself apart.

I enjoyed the level of contemplation the characters gave to the taboo nature of the sex. It wasn't ignored, which would be unrealistic and in my opinion hurt the story. However the story didn't get bogged down in emotional angst by dwelling on and continually revisiting the tension between flesh and conscience.

I enjoy the circumstances and situations that create a taboo story. The more realistic, the more I enjoy it. It was refreshing to read what I'd consider a wild tale, which of course means maintaining the realism is challenging, but at no time did I lose interest because there was unrealistic dialogue or set ups. Great idea and execution establishing the close girlfriend type relationship between mom and daughter.

not often does a new way of presenting a subject that has been done and done and done come along.

quite creative.

As in "fuck you are good". Lol. And I mean very very fucking good! Thanks........😉

Loved it. Keep going. You write excellent stories.

I think this was the best story you have written. No one could ask for more. I sincerely thank you for writing this. it was very very enjoyable.

The old fart

I've read several of your's in the past week. Enjoyed them all.

Definitely one of the best you've written! You should definitely write a sequel to this story, it'd be awesome and incredibly hot, to read what sexual endeavors go on between the two siblings and the Mom. And particularly if there are any emotional developments between them. Maybe showing Danny and Cassie continuing their relationship as they head off to college, or Danny accompanying their Mom to an office party. Perhaps Danny getting one or both women pregnant. Just food for thought, but either way, great job and it definitely is going on my favorite's list.

TOO GOOD! 5 stars...

I loved the surprise seductions in this one. It had several elements that really did it for me.

Thanks for sharing. Love your stories.

Mark

There are stories that come along and you say I wish that happened to me.

Well! I wish this happen to me!

Jneric says it very well ... i do wish that too ...

A great read, it got my imagination running and i just couldnt put it down.

Thanks blaster666

2nd time reading and it was as good as then!

WOW!!! Great read. And I agree with these others.

Danny, first you get your sister, then your mother, and there both HOT for you a pt. 2 would be nice......Good read THANKS

Sorry, I know others have liked the story but I couldn't get past how Cassie wound up in a 69 position on Danny when Danny pushed her hands down after Cassie twisted his nipples. Just couldn't see how it could happen unless Cassie was a gymnast and swung her legs up and over Danny. Really didn't seem physically possible for them to end up 69ing each other. Then mum drops her towel to stand naked in front of both Danny and Cassie. Stretched my imagination beyond what it could cope with. :)

Will there be a part 2?

Really great story!! Just promise us, please, please, never use the words Meaty or Flaps again. All I could picture was gristled overcooked hamburger pussy lips on some sixty year old porn star that's fucked a few too many thousands guys and who knows what else! Serious mood killer when the story was going great!

If you'll look at the beginning of the story when he felt someone behind him before turning his head backward and seeing his sister standing there, then perhaps you might begin to understand the situation a little better...maybe...

Perhaps an epilogue or just an excerpt at the end about how Danny didn't find any girls outside of his mom and sis to be with.That in the end he and his mom come to the conclusion that they love each other indefinitely, that Danny wasnt going to be with any other woman except for his sister on the side (as they state when his mom and him finish their copulation).

Mom, daughter, and son ,....a perfect mix.

Excellent development of plot.

Good description of sec.

Wish I had a weekend of magic.

Gave it 5 stars after having read it for the first time, verdict stays the same after second reading. Just one minor thing. When Cassie ask him to have intercourse with her Danny asks: no quit pro quo this time? Well, if the outcome is mutually satisfying, as to be expected, they'd be at quits after the act, wouldn't they?

In other words, some sort of reciprocal would be necessary only if one of them will surely orgasm through intercourse but the other one will not. Nothing in this story indicates a presumption like that was justified.

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Good story just strange how he keeps running scared from mom. Like power out scene. He just pulled out and ran to tv but why he afraid of mom coming to see them? She already stood watching them in living room.

(3/28/2022) Loved this story. It was happy and kind of sweet. One of the best I've read on this site. I didn't believe this story was long at all as one of your fans had commented. I cringe when I find an interesting title and the word count is only 3 or 4k. As long as it's all meat and no gristle ( NOT a gay pun) I'm happy. Five stars and it goes on my list.

Very well done. A definite 5⭐️

One of the best approaches to incest I’ve ever read.

Bill S.

Hawt und Sweet!

11/10!!!!!

Really enjoyed reading this story! The built up was nice and plot and character development was nicely done. I liked that sister was older than Danny and mom played well with slow building up instead of having sex the first chance she got. Would of been nicer of the story was bit longer to let the built up increase with mom and son.

A little longer than I’m used to but well worth it. I give you an A+.

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You ruined a great story with that "trick him into fucking someone else" CRAP, that's just disgusting and unforgivable, scheming and manipulating a person like that.

One of my favorites. Wonderfully done. Unfortunately 5 stars is the most we are allotted.