All Comments on 'You're Mine and You Know It Ch. 02'

I like it & its getting beter and better! Its good that you had 2 pages too!

Please keep writing these stories! They'd be even better if they were longer...

Great story.Very hot and erotic . Show no mercy to the lil slut and keep that ass of hers plugged and controlled 24/7. Hope you will make this an ongoing story. Like I said make this lil slut submit to being their anal slave. ( kaylee in Arizona)

Please continue this fantastic storyline. Excellent descriptions of emotions, intentions and sexual submission without spoiling what is yet to cum. I'm anxiously awaiting your next submission (pun intended).

This is the best erotic lesbian story I have ever read. Damn. My vagina is literally achingly in love with me :'D

sorry but i just dont get it at all couldnt cum once

I was wondering if you could add a development of feelings (love, jealousy...), Idk, perhaps between Ashley & Jennifer... Well it's your story and ofc I admire your writing so, that's only a suggestion. Thanks! Keep up the great job!

Please do another chapter! With Ashley getting jealous and falling for Jennifer. Would be awesome! Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Will Kayla become Jennifer's next mistress - and then perhaps some role reversal with Jenniver on top?

Wonderfully sexy. I'd love to see more of this. But, can you please find an editor? The typos and spelling errors detracted from an otherwise great story (hymn vs. hymen was the worst).

I really feel bad for Jennifer. I always get hooked on stories like these, but for some reason I feel like I should give them a akward hug or something. Like I don't feel bad for them, but you wish you could help them in some way. Sucks you're inactive nowadays, and the thing I have a question about is, are you Jennifer or are you posting this for her or something?

Wow...so this went from okay to pretty awful, fairly quickly. First off...grammar and spelling. What woman doesn't know how to spell hymen? I thought when you typed "hymn" the first time it was a typo, but then you did it repeatedly. A "hymn" is a religious song. I "hymen" is the membrane near the entry of a woman's vagina. Secondly, try to keep your story structure understandable. Several times it was unclear who Jennifer was speaking to. Third you sound pretty proud of the fact this is a true story of sexual abuse. I can honestly say that recounting a rape for your own titillation isn't something you should be proud of. In fact you might think about therapy to deal with that bit of sickness.

Is the number a real one or did you just type 10 random digits

Okay spelling was off grammar mistakes here and there but super hot story

Love the domme theme...write some more...please