All Comments on 'You're Mine Ch. 01'

To each their own kinks. And now to my opinion:

This reads like an old school letter to Penthouse magazine. It is raw pornography as opposed to erotica. You have set the stage with as many harsh words and images as you can fit into it. What isn't included is character development and any reasons for us to want to care about these two. Were they real people, I wouldn't want to knowingly have them in my life as I am left with the impression that nasty is not just their bed play (acceptable), but a way of life (unacceptable).

PS. All humans judge. We judge everything we encounter. To say otherwise is to lie to yourself and others. What is an opinion but the result of a judgement? All that changes is what we do with our judgements and opinions.

my baby S.J is going to get fucked like the dirty cock worshipping white she wants to be for me now that I'm her master

Love this!!! I just squirted and soaked my own sheets, from reading this!!! Thank​ you

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