All Comments on 'You're Not an Ordinary Girl'

It’s erie how her fantasy stemmed from the snake in the Jungle book because the same is actually true for me...

Good job. Loved it. Your writing has real promise

Now to brass tax. Fuck you for blue balling me

This idea is very exciting. I know it isn't your regular practice to do series, but I'd love to see additional chapters with a little more detail.

Love this short story. One of my fantasies is to be hypnotised (though not by Kaa lol )

This was an awesome addition to your fantastic body of work

This is pretty good for a short story. I think the concept, of non-human or mind controlling sex dolls, could be expanded upon further.

Considering it stops short of any sex ... Very hot!

Loved the story because that's how I got into hypnosis. Didn't really think of it as sexgual then, bud I was kind of obsessed with it.

You various readers do realize that this is chapter 11 in an ongoing series of shorts, right?