All Comments on 'You're The One Ch. 03'

Thank you for such a wonderful story! Love your writing!

Loved all three chapters. Thank you for a beautiful story.

Your writing would be stronger if you did some research about the legal system and used less cliched dialogu - e.g. The day of the trial the lawyer says they need to tell her if there's anything she needs to know?

An excellent three part story. Keep on writing more like this.

Yes, this story has some hot sex scenes but what stood out for me were these women (and a man), who overcome adversity through Love and the support of family & friends. Simply Beautiful. These elements make the difference between Living Life to the fullest, Existing, and Death (to include suicide and the walking dead). Well done WilBeLes

Though in tying up the story in this chapter, I felt it was a bit rushed in certain sections and the sex was put in, just to have sex. Sometimes a little goes a long way in a really good story.

I love your work, and can't wait to read more!

L

Is it dumb that I cried? I loved this story, tho short in some details, I was amazed by it and it's strong characters. It had shuch an amazing message and honestly I would have loved if you made it longer just to keep on reading it. And don't get me started on the sex scenes

Throughout this story you made it clear that Shannon and Elise hated the concept of sharing. Then they have an orgy with a swinging couple. This completely ruined the story and I couldn't finish after that started.

Please make a fourth part, it's so amazing. I love the story so much.

I really enjoyed this story, from beginning to end. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

This is a real life story of love and friendships and able to prove with the right friends you can get help when needed and when you have trouble and need help true friends will always be there for you and all the love between all of these friends please write more soon you are a fantastic writer WilBeLes. xxx

I remember a time in this where they said they would never share their body with another. In the wedding vows there is a part where its to stay faithful to one another. THEN they lied and shat all over there wedding vows ON THEIR HONEYMOON. I was thinking this was a nice romance until they decided to fuck others ON THEIR HONEYMOON. What in gods name was you thinking?