by angelicsounds
Love it! Please more and soon! Cant wait to find out what happens between caden and elise! Oh boy its going to be hott! Thanks!!
Can't wait for an update on Ben and Austin! I think I'm in love with this story(: <3 Lillian, KR.
A brilliant chapter and it will be fun to follow them all this year. Well Done. PJ xx
I love these two! I wonder how the boys are doing? Looking forward to more!
i can't wait to read the remaining chapters..this story just pulls you right in and makes you feel for the characters...keep up the good work.
The story is lacking, there's no depth, the accepting part is unbelieveable,its like your sugar coating the story, they dont fight, she's not freaking about having a connection to a WEREWOLF? That she just saw shift, and she didnt even believe they existed 2 minutes before he did that...
i absolutely love it! I really want to read more about all of them (including the new brothers!!) I have loved all of your stories but think this is the best so far! keep writing please!!!!
The story lacks a certain amount of credibility. The characters seem to have no depth and your writing is woefully lacking in discription. I think you need to focus more on your writing skills. The idea of the story is good but the execution is disappointing.
Wow, this story is amazing. I know it's a bit early, but will this story be spun-off into a series? After all Caden and Austin have other siblings. This would be interesting way to further develop the characters and add more background to the story.
PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY. I FIND IT INTERESTING THAT THOSE MAKING COMPLAINTS FAIL TO LOG IN. IT'S EASY TO TEAR DOWN A WRITER WITHOUT SUPPLYING A VALID VIEW POINT AND STANDING UP BEHIND YOUR STATEMENT. IF SCIFI AND NON-HUMAN STORY ARE NOT THING, THAT’S OKAY. REGARDLESS, I READ THESES GENRES FOR ESCAPISM AND I ENJOY IT.
SO ANGELICSOUNDS, DO YOUR THING AND I SUPPORT YOUR WRITING.
I can't wait for part 8!! I stumbled upon this series and I love it.
I am so loving this story line. I cannot wait until chpt 8 comes out. Have you ever thought about developing a story line surrounding the other siblings?
excellent story - your foray into nonhuman writing is great - cant wait for the next installment!!