Youth & Experience

Well? So what happens now? Would like to read where Stanly ant the wife get theirs. Oh yeah, like the other comments suggest, get yourself a good proof reader :-) . . . .

I mean the ending sucked like bad to just leave it unless it eas a cliff hanger and I would get someone to help with the writing missing words and such but other than that you have the making of a great writer I would love to read more

Keep going the story just got startesd.

But you need a proofreader BAD!

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You fucking..."

"What? Say it, Jake. What am I?"

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You fucking cheating ass, white trash slut! You worthless scab on the ass of humanity!

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"I just don't understand, Daddy. Why is fucking Mom?"

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Honey, he said he just got sick and tired of listening to you talk and leaving words out of your sentences.

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she was naked as the day she was born, and she was fingering her pussy as erratic as possible.

I couldn't believe what I was saying. I wanted to look away, but I couldn't.

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...what were you saying?? Hehehe.

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Sam's eyes shot open and she gasped. When she saw meet, her expression relaxed and she smiled.

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Who did she meet?? Ooh, she saw meat and relaxed and smiled? All girls should like meat! (This one was just too good to pass up, hehehe!;)

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I nodded. "Have you only see his cock?"

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I'm sure she saw his cock, they are married ya know! Ooh, did you mean sea cock? Are we going sailing?? They are down by the water! Hehe!

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Her right hand went further and further down until she engulfed my cock with it, and began stroking up as erratically as she could.

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She *wanted* to stroke him erratically?? I guess you have to work at it to do it erratically instead of a normal pace. Ooh, maybe you meant stroke him erotically! Hmm, maybe an erratic stroke IS erotic!! ;)

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I had never seen anymore else cum like that. I was glorious.

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One hand typing? Drunk autocorrect?? Anymore Else is an awfully funny name for a guy, don't you think? ....and as for I, what base is he on?? Bwuhahaha! ;)

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As she came back down, her eyes found mine and she reached up and kissed me, not even caring if my juices were on my tongue.

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W wwwwhaaaaat?? He was jacking off and eating his own cum while he was going down on her?? Ewww!! ;)

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still want to be your father, but I also really want to fuck your brains out.

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I think that is my favorite line in the whole, awesome story!! :). Go dad!!

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I pounded her cunt a few more times until I felt her cunt squeeze like a vise on my cock, and she came with an total of eleven orgasms for my viewing pleasure.

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Eleven. Times. Where is this woman so I can kidnap her and strand both of us on a deserted island?!? Lol! I'd be thrilled if my wife could cum at all from just fucking. :(

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Dad, we have the entire week. Don't worry. I just can't be around you when we get back. Too much of a distraction.

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Aww, poor daddy! From the barren plains to paradise, then back to the cracked, dry earth! Hehe.

WELL, that was spectacularly awesome!!! All my word error fun aside, that was a really great story! Thanks again for writing it!