All Comments on 'You've Been Flirting Again Ch. 05'
by miserybusiness
- 12 Comments
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI read all of ur chapters in about an hour. This is a great story. Why can't there be more Chris guys in the world?!
willerileyover 12 years agoYou never let go of the voice and personality of your main character. This is very hard to do - i.e. keep an unusual character convincing and feeling authentic. Bravo!
For some reason, the girl reminded me of a docu I saw titled, "Robert Maplethorpe Gets His Nipple Pierced." On screen is the real Maplethope getting his nipple pierced w/no sound. The only sound is provided by a young girl - off camer - who oas a thick country accent. She's droning on and on in a monotone about something pedantic that has nothing to do w/what's on camera.
It was absolutely hysterical.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis girl reminds me of myself so much its awesome. Just wish it was longer :[
got2luvmelover 12 years agoshe finally broke up with Roy and owned up to her own faults in the entire mess. I also really loved that she stuck to her guns and didn't immediately hook up with Chris.
This was a great ending to a great story (at least I'm assuming it's the end since it sounds finished), thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed it -Mel
Anonymousover 12 years agoI really hope you continue this story. It was just starting to get good with Chris. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE continue the story soon
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI hope you plan on adding more chapters soon.
Mardybummover 11 years agoseriously story of my life just about except my ex douche was never into what I was into. I absolutely loved this story such a great read.I thought my sister and I were the only ones who said awesomesauce. you mam are pretty badass. ty for writing and please. keep it up :D
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI wish my college year had been so successful....too much time as a 2am girlfriend, ah well wasted youth. Great story. ending now is good. Don't let them pressure you into writing the 'happily ever after' for them!
bbcatqueenabout 2 years ago❤️❤️❤️
“watching Chris lick his lips and bite his nonexistent bottom lip.”, now that had me cracking up but overall one of my favorite stories on the site.
