All Comments on 'Yrba's Travels Pt. 05'

Your story keeps getting better and I for one would be happy to see more chapters like chapter 25 so keep it coming.

Over the past few nights I've read all five stories. They are very good. Every damn bit of it. The story lines are good. The details are very vivid. And the ending to the last part was very good. It was touching. The whole series so far as been very good, damn good if you ask me. I can't wait to read the next instalment.

So, the most part was great, and the final part was enough of a tear jerker to add that extra depth to the storie. Love the whole, been thinking that this would make a WONDERFULL anime, got the right interactions for it. 8D

Thanks for the thanks btw :P

The unusual fetish on which the core of this story is based does not affect the fact that this is a great story by a great writer. Excellent descriptive narrative, a believable undercurrent to all the relationships and defined characters. Without the erotic content it could easily be perceived as something from Terry Pratchett's musings.

Sad to see Berry go, but a jolt of reality just adds to the depth. I've had a lot of fun reading so far...thank you. I hope you get to enjoy my story soon...I just need to finish the draft...but hey, this is about you not me :D