All Comments on 'Zach Ch. 02: Powers Claim His Sis'

please keep going, lots more hot stuff to do yet

please keep going, lots more hot stuff to do yet

Twins!? From having sex twice?

Are you retarded? Are you a child?

Learn how sex works begore writing about it, goddamn.

You passed over what the Writer said at the Top of Chapter #1 . Maybe you should go back and Read it.

As the title said, I got more amusement in terms of it being a comedy than anything arising. I get some folks are into dirty talk, but could we get away from the B movie grade porn script?

I have always had a redhead fetish, my late wife was a natural dark redhead. I could not get enough of her. Keep up the good work

I've noticed a few of your Zach stories, any chance we can see what should be read in what order?

A second great Chapter in a great story!, After knocking up his favorite nurse a second time, Zach couldn't wait to get home before he started setting up his Mom and his Big Sis right in his hospital room! Great stuff! And back home, having a shower with his Sis and doing her ass was just beautifully done. Looking forward to Zack knocking up bothe his Sis and his Mom, now that he has both of them set up for all he has to offer. Thanx for another nice Read!

This story is fucking terrible.