All Comments on 'Zachary'

This is one of the very, very few here, or elsewhere, that are superbly written, with a voice, a style, and an effect that are just miles better than most. Thanks.

well done. i'd wager this was a true story.

This one was refreshingly different, realistic in a sobering kind of way. Unfortunately, these kinds of stories are harder to be aroused by and thus usually get a lower rating, but I can still appreciate the quality of the writing and the original thought. Thank you for writing it.

Different take. Disturbing. Unhappy. Well done.

well written, enjoyed very much,,,sad of course but so is life sometimes,,

Unusual story. Not your typical tale. No love. No passion. Simply dark.

i think this is a great story - frankly my favorite on this site. it turns me on and i feel enriched for having read it. am i personally a little fucked up? sure. i like to believe that zachary will get out of that town one day

Well written. Has a kind of 'noir' feel to it. The protagonist has a maturity about him which perhaps belies his age. Liked the way you described how he felt upon feeling the breast - how it's more than the physical sensation, much more.

I feel like this story was not just a story..... the way its told hurts... there is a man out there with deep scars at his mother unintentionally bestowed upon him. God this breaks my heart