All Comments on 'Zero Dumb Game'

by JukeboxEMCSA

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nicely done

One of the few unique ideas i've seen on literotica, and a well-written story.

Please continue this, there's tons of room for a sequel or even a series XD

GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinover 6 years ago
Super Creative!

This story was really interesting and fun to read, and it took an angle I haven't seen before. That said, I have to admit I have mixed feelings. I think the story is actually a bit lax on the rapist—a predator who's probably just going to buy more pills and go back to what he does for fun. I'd feel better if her commands were stronger ("Go turn yourself in") or there was otherwise a hint at harsher punishment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I don't know...

Jukebox, I've read all your stories on Literotica and the EMCSA, and this is the first one I can truly say I don't like.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I'm so glad she didn't get raped, the turn around was so satisfying

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