All Comments on 'Zoe Finds Her Truth'

by ShyKatrina98

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
very good

this is turning out to be a good start, can't wait to see where this is going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More please!

So that was a great start & I'm certainly ready for the next part to come out!!

gjames17gjames17about 8 years ago
Great start!

Please don't wait too long to post the next chapter. Very well written! I can't wait to read what happens next. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good start, but . . .

A good start, a comprehensive character portrait, BUT . . . big BUT, the ending is a litttle too abrupt. It leaves a sense of disappointment, of unsatisfied curiosity.

Will look forward to thge sequal

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good start

Can't wait for more!

KumquatMayKumquatMayabout 8 years ago
Ignore the idiot anon commenter

who whined about your not indicating there'd be more. He's obviously a grumpy old man trying to get his rocks off reading girl on girl porn. However, your story is erotica, sweet & delightful. I would consider myself lucky if you continurd this nicely written & well thought out story. 5 stars, because you earned 'em!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice start

Thanks for this - a sort of novel idea. Well set up and I will look out for a further instalment. Five stars from me on trust of what is to come:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
5 Star Start

I look forward to more! I love the details you use to flesh out the characters and their world.

redlion75redlion75about 8 years ago

sorry kumsquat i agree if this is the first chapter then please note that in the title

CynthiasAdventureCynthiasAdventureabout 8 years ago
Wonderful

Eager for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More!!

Looking forward to more of this story.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 8 years ago

Oh wow, This is damn good! Argh, I hate it ended so soon. I will have to begrudgely wait for the next chapter. Ba humbug!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Why

Why hasn't there been another update!?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
ShyKatrina98,

Hallo Katrina,

my wife told me about your story "Zoe Finds Her Truth", saying it remind her of me and something I had told her,,, I didn't know who you were until after I read your story and was looking for chapter 2, and found ShyKatrina98 on literotica, then realized I had read your first story,,, Jackie's right and I would love to read more, if there is more?

Thank you,,, 5&5 _ 5-Stars and 5-Possible Orgasms..

Your very un-shy dyke friend,

Gay Kat.

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