by ShyKatrina98
this is turning out to be a good start, can't wait to see where this is going
So that was a great start & I'm certainly ready for the next part to come out!!
Please don't wait too long to post the next chapter. Very well written! I can't wait to read what happens next. Thank you!
A good start, a comprehensive character portrait, BUT . . . big BUT, the ending is a litttle too abrupt. It leaves a sense of disappointment, of unsatisfied curiosity.
Will look forward to thge sequal
who whined about your not indicating there'd be more. He's obviously a grumpy old man trying to get his rocks off reading girl on girl porn. However, your story is erotica, sweet & delightful. I would consider myself lucky if you continurd this nicely written & well thought out story. 5 stars, because you earned 'em!
Thanks for this - a sort of novel idea. Well set up and I will look out for a further instalment. Five stars from me on trust of what is to come:)
I look forward to more! I love the details you use to flesh out the characters and their world.
sorry kumsquat i agree if this is the first chapter then please note that in the title
Oh wow, This is damn good! Argh, I hate it ended so soon. I will have to begrudgely wait for the next chapter. Ba humbug!!
Hallo Katrina,
my wife told me about your story "Zoe Finds Her Truth", saying it remind her of me and something I had told her,,, I didn't know who you were until after I read your story and was looking for chapter 2, and found ShyKatrina98 on literotica, then realized I had read your first story,,, Jackie's right and I would love to read more, if there is more?
Thank you,,, 5&5 _ 5-Stars and 5-Possible Orgasms..
Your very un-shy dyke friend,
Gay Kat.