All Comments on 'Zoe's Awakening Pt. 04'

I love your writing and the story started out amazing, but the story took a completely different turn, and it's the wrong turn. Now she's just pathetic and a whore. I hope you find some way to redeem her and she'll be able fight this sick temptation, nobody likes willing sluts, also I liked it better with just Page, group sex is kinda gross. What's happening to Mark is so sad. I'm left feeling very disappointed.

Make it a non con again, please!

Thanks for your feedback, reader.

I'm sorry you didn't like this chapter. However, as the title of this story suggests, this is about an awakening. Zoe is evolving and as such, will respond to things in new and surprising ways. Page remains a sadistic, arrogant bastard who wants to push her limits as much as possible, which is what he was attempting to do with the gangbang. Mark is not as sympathetic a character as you might think. Stay tuned.

Oh my goodness...my ex's name was Mark, and like Zoe, I always wanted something...more. I love this series, please continue!

Your writing's amazing, you take the story where you feel it should go. I'm sorry about me last comment, I didn't take the title into consideration lol. I'll definitely stay tuned

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