All Comments on 'Zoe's New Life Pt. 01'

I look forward to the following chapters

Loved this, can't wait for more :)

The story is pure fantasy, I get it. But it'd be better if you had made it a bit more realistic. You go for a job and before anything else, the boss asks you to become his slave. But it is a story full of potential

4 stars from me

I suspected that Zoe wouldn't go with Page from the way she crumpled up his post-it but I thought they had a real connection where he knew how to push her and when to be tender with her. I'm very curious to read more about her new life and what she was thinking in completely striking out on her own.

Excellent story looking forward too the next chapters

Sadly it seems like the author gave up. - Give it another try please and expose this universe further.

All the best