All Comments on 'Zombies Ch. 00'

I like your writing. Fairly solid if a bit too dramatic. Look forward to something sexy happening! :p

just right!!!

I am only just starting this series and am enjoying it a fair amount. There are a couple of things that pulled me out of it, little errors is all. You said not enough people left to manufacture a plague, think you meant vaccine or cure, another was saying horrendous swing...so a disgusting swing, sorta makes sense, but humongous, savage, powerful, all would have made more sense to me. Finally ANFO is ridiculously stable, not highly unstable, and you need a extremely fast moving detonator moving over 1000f/s to set it off. But your story and ideas are top notch. Well done, just a couple friendly edits from where I'm sitting.