All Comments on 'Zynab's Skirt'

Glad to see you're writing again...would like a conclusion to whore 94...it felt somewhat open ended

It was somewhat similar to the Whore 94 series, but I suppose that is your fantasy/fetish. I was somewhat bored with the Whore 94 series, although it was one of my favorites, it does need closure however... Although I wouldn't mind some new fresh meat.

Really liked this one. Zynab and Vanessa are both characters you could do a lot with. I look forward to reading more!

This is the single most arousing, well written, girl-on-girl story I've ever read, ad an spectacular offering to the alter of Dominance and humiliation.

Thank you, thank you very very much.

fantastic story! really well written and descriptive and simply hot!

I love the POV of this story, it's a lovely new twist. Very hot and descriptive. Also, thanks for making Francesca 18. Because if she were any younger, it wouldn't be morally right and I would've stopped reading this great fic.

This is some wonderfully-written lesbian domination! It's a fresh angle, yet absolutely nails the power dynamic without ever going overboard. Exactly what I was hoping to find this evening!

One little thing: There's a sentence where Zynab moves her foot to "Zynab's" face, which should read to "Francesca's".

(Also I'm snickering at the person who was grateful for Francesca being 18 so that the story is "morally" OK to enjoy. A story in which at least two violent *rapes* occur, and many more are implied.)

This is hot. I think In the next story Zynab needs to take over Vanessa. You’ve hinted that Banessa craves it.