by unpredictablebijou
i enjoyed this poem very much. that first line grabbed me and your writing held me to the end. thank you for sharing your poetry.
Great Carpe Diem poem. What an intriguing –concrete “mini death” of sorts you chose for a starting point for a love of life poem. <P>
Some approaches exist vis -a –vis time and the maxim of ‘live life to the fullest’. One is: live life to the fullest in every moment as if it’s your last; another (the one you seemed to follow) offers you to live every moment as if you’ll never die. I join you with my preference to the latter.