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wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
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i enjoyed this poem very much. that first line grabbed me and your writing held me to the end. thank you for sharing your poetry.

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 17 years ago
Carpe Diem a la Molar…

Great Carpe Diem poem. What an intriguing –concrete “mini death” of sorts you chose for a starting point for a love of life poem. <P>

Some approaches exist vis -a –vis time and the maxim of ‘live life to the fullest’. One is: live life to the fullest in every moment as if it’s your last; another (the one you seemed to follow) offers you to live every moment as if you’ll never die. I join you with my preference to the latter.

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