All Comments on 'Keeping Time'

Simple and clean,

An easy read;

A subjective call here,

I would change one line to, "round and round;"

Seems to flow off the tongue better.

A lovely rendering richly describing the appearance and actions of a clock. Clean vivid images. Well Crafted.

the literary journey through a read in its time (~_~) ...wonderful

the most precious gift of all. Clearly, that was realized this holiday, else you would not have written such a beautiful piece in which the reader can HEAR the clock. I do hope that you shared time that was needed, where it was needed.

lunch..time for a break..time to catch the bus..time, time, time. How would we live in todays world without, time...and our quartz watches. Well done.