by ingarlm
Surperb writing as always. Loving and romantic. Really love this story
Marvelous piece of work. What a way to go. Cant wait for the conclusion... Cat (Lol Calit69 - it is not about Durban being awake before Cape Town. Here we work hard before we party hard. Mwah!)
just wow...i can't even think of anything else to say...it was just wow...wonderful:)
Two days???? I have to wait at least another two days for the next installment!!!! Forgive me of my rude impatience but this is just too good to stop!!! It's like one of those books you just can't seem to put down. Your writing is simply spectacular, and your ability to convey emotions with the simplest of descriptions is nothing short of amazing. Thank you for this story.
Again you have maintained and heightened the tension in a most romantic manner. Makes for a refreshing change So close to finishing line cant afford to stumble although it would make a very cruel twist to the story. Keep it up Most enjoyable (Cape Town please, work only starts at 0900 and then one has to pay homage to the mountain at some stage during the day. Party hard in CT been a number of years- remember very good times
The story is so sweet. I am wanting to see them together. Such a perfect romance.
This fabulous, truly romantic story builds toward climax(es). The tantalizing, x-rated-lustful thoughts are shared by both men in the same way. The one doesn't want just to get laid, but to have a lifelong permanent relationship with the man he adores. The other tells himself his desperate need stems not from his cock, but from his heart and head. So they arrive at the ultimate declaration of love at the same moment. I love the subtle sexual psychology the author gently develops.
talk about drag it out.? get em fucked and move on.? its like pulling teeth. i love a good love story.? but at this rate, they will be retired by the time you get round to it.?
Pacing is just fine. I love the story and the way you are telling it.