All Comments on 'A Foreign Affair'

by BenLong

Sort by:
  • 10 Comments
Marklynda2Marklynda2about 1 year ago

Isn't that spooky? An out of body experience thousands of miles apart! A very well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wtf

the story just ends like that ? there is no ending !!!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A LOT OF THINGS MAY BE USED AS A SCARF

towels, pillows, linens shirts etc. TK U MLJ LV NV

HikergirlHikergirlabout 12 years ago
Ah...the power of the imagination...

...is really a wonderful thing, eh?

GulfMisprintGulfMisprintalmost 13 years ago
at the end...

that was a really cute twist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Dripping

This was by far one of the best, but of course you will be continuing this or already have right? I have to hear more especially after being so drenched after this. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
CHARMING

I REALLY LIKED IT.

NO SADO OR MACHO,JUST ENJOYMENT ON BOTH SIDES

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
(sci-fi music)

Well-written

SlickTonySlickTonyover 17 years ago
Cybering at its Best

If this is what cybering can be made to be, I'm sorry it didn't exist when I was in circulation!

I assume you're going to carry on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
opening doors

So you've openned the door to something. You can't quit here.

I await

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userBenLong@BenLong
Started writing as submissions on the old Voyeurweb.com bulletin boards. Found I had a bit of a knack for stories that people like, and just continued. I love to hear back from readers when they like a story, or with story ideas, suggestions, or just discussions on anything.