by Bazzza
reread for me and changed from 4 to 5 stars because of the beautiful ending.
beaitiful but still a fairy tail
sadly men like jacob are purely imaginary
most nice guys like jacob either turn into a narcissist wife beater or just remaims as a predator / fuckboy on his journey to conquer numerous vulnerable georgia living all of them ashamed for falling for him
end of story
Had a really sad day but this girl lightened my mood, perfect amount of sweetness and humor! Wish I’d find my rockstar and songwriter some day
This really is my kind of story, I love a good romantic tale.
Georgia and Jacob are well crafted, real people. The story is spot on for tempo and believeability. And, as someone else pointed out, you really nailed the landing.
10 out of out 10 from me, I will check out more of your writing.
Well written and nicely paced, plus you stuck the landing at the end.
It’s too bad the band never made it big, but seems like they had a good life. Thanks go to the author for this story.
no place like home
pretty neat to see nz
here
thankyou, and keep writing
Really enjoyed that, specially coming from my part of the world. Hope it's at least partly true; I'm going to keep on thinking so anyway.....
thanks
Really nice story, maybe a little short, but lovely.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
should read this one
Thanks, a nice romance with realistic characters. Enjoyed the fun family ending too.
Great little story, just enough detail for its length and it flowed well. The epilogue was a very nice touch with a vignette all of its own.
Thank you for posting!
liked the easy banter between the two and knowing the places you mentioned, gets more points.
I truly enjoyed reading this. Very well written and steamy as all hell!!!
Great story. Captures the New Zealand sense of humour perfectly.
Only seven reviews and less than 10k views so far for this story? Man, these are unbelievable stats for such a great story.
Well, I really liked what I've read and wish to thank you for sharing this story with us.
Lovely story with good characters and some lively dialog, most of it in bed. Just had to give it five stars for the happy ending.
What a fun, short, romantic story. I like how you used the young girl to break the ice. Very believable. Look forward to more stories in the future.
If you look up at the notches in the headboard, every one of them is from a satisfied lover who has experienced multiple orgasms in this very bed."
Georgia raised her eyes, "There's no notches in the headboard."
"Shit, isn't there, I must be a lousy lover too."
GREAT set of lines-well done!
There is something about the uncertainty of freshly meeting that just grabs me.
Bazzza, where have you been? We've missed you. I hope this means you will be gracing us with more of your superb stories real soon. As usual, this one is outstanding.