by Jayashree100
Fantastic story ! The lady has written so erotically adn so well, that I almost came in my pants ! Hope we get to read more from this writer
You convey the changing complexity of her feelings excellently. Including her body's adaptation to, and ultimately intense pleasure in, their sex.
Well done. Please write more.
Taking advantage of a woman who is weak is no great story - NOT SEXY AT ALL,
You are sick. See a Psychiatrist.
The village jamindar are like this. Exploitation does take place. You have captured the rural environment very well. Please write more.
I am a 19 yr old Indian girl. I absolutely loved the story! I actually imagined myself to be on Sangeeta's place and ended up cumming 4 times... It is not sexist at all. It depicts the rural environment well and also shows that a woman also has needs though she may not confess them. I am a virgin and am desperately trying to find a guy with Babuuji's organ size :P
The whole cervix thing ruined it for me. If you really messed with a cervix like that a woman wouldn't be able to carry children.
Thankfully it's pretty near dammed impossible that a cock could overpower a womb - the womb is the most powerful muscle in the whole of the human body.
One of the most erotic stories I have ever read. The tension , the disgust, the sheer arousal under every circumstance was so visible in the mind when I read the story.
Its high time you make a comeback to writing.
The storyline was masterfully crafted. The scenario was intelligently conceived.
Skillful, effective use of hyperboles was duly noted.
A very very well written non-consent sex story.
Lovely imagination. So minutely detailing every thurst and push deep down in the delicate vagina till the very inside the womb.
She has been a widow for three years already. Why didn't her FIL just marry her one or two years after her husband died?
She loved his big old long cock shoved up into her at the end. Very great story and enjoy reading these types.
What s/he said --densecarnaldesires --.
This story is so well crafted and arousing. Every time I read this story I have to stop and masturbate at certain intervals. For this to happen in real life. I can't even imagine, it would be horrible. But for a story, and your choice of words and words grouping, Your pace, the anticipation, you drag us right into the story. Oh My.
Thank you for continued joy every time I read this.