All Comments on 'Backpack in Mother Earth's Crack'

This may be a little slow for Lit readers, but the writing is excellent, and the sex is very hot once it starts, original too. The descriptions of the outdoors are especially good and genuine and far more authentic than most of what's in the contest. Fine job.

stories that stimulate the mind as much as the um nanas...lol. Good work please continue. Always, E

Wonderful!! Loved the attention to detail with the natural surroundings. Loved how the story built up.

Please, please, continue!

Fantastic attention to detail, great buildup and hot sex!! Wonderful!

Great story....WOW!!

A very moving and erotic story. From the struggle of the man to maintain his faithfullness, to the descriptive narration of the physical beauty surrounding them, I loved it. And being an older male, the fanatasy of a sexy younger woman being interested is just icing on the cake!

Great story, I can't wait for the sequal

Realistic and thanks for sharing the inner thoughts most of us have. Excllent perfect "climactic" ending!

Why did you stop it there, no continuation with them together, no fulfilling his needs with the other women coming.

good work

I loved how well you described the characters thoughts. The development is nicely paced too. I look forward to eventually getting all the way to the end before cumming! :D