by lucky-E-leven
The way you tell a story leaves me breathless. Your stories reflect the inner YOU --- Erotic, sexy, passionate, intense and positively HOT!
L, I've read and re-read your story too many times already while editing it, and already told you how much I liked it, but well, I am leaving a PC too. So sue me. :D
You have a great beginning there with the lily pads; the wondering about what was happening pulled me right in. I loved the easy-going, sexy, naughty relationship between Miranda and Josie. The story's really great and you have a natural story-telling ability which shines through every word you write. Keep going, girl! More, more, give us more!
If so, I want to meet them!
Great story Love, keep them coming. I loved the way you started with the dream. After you told me this was for Earth Day I was wondering why there were fairies in the story, quickly realizing what was happening.
You really pull the reader in wanting to know what was going to happen next, very sexy!
Luv ya,
Cealy
I want to save the planet too!!!!!!
Totally hot,L, they just keep getting better and better. Will you plant a tree with me?*wink*
I'll be thinking of it the next time I plant a rose bush. ;)
- Mindy
Now I'm a strictly dickly kinda gal, but I enjoyed this story.
I especially loved when you described Josie's motionless climax. That was wickedly erotic!
Another Lucky story. This is becoming old hat. Another delicious romp told with your own wonderful style :) Keep up the good work, you are doing your part to keep america strong, by keeping the sales of laundry detergent at an all time high! Ribbing aside, great story hun.
-Colly
That I had a mind that could write lesbian erotica. Until that time I will be content reading author's like yourself that obviously know how its supposed to be done. Always E
I will admit that this is the first Lesbian story that I have read, and I very much enjoyed it.
Great story Lucky!
wonderful... passionate... I could go on and on. Please keep writing.
The only problem with this story is that is we didn't quite make it to "strap-on" day. You should do an entire calender of these!
... I had to "do Lucky" again. ;) I had trouble finding some Lucky I hadn't already done! This was a delightfully squirm-inspiring treat (as expected). Thanks. ~Imp
The characters were well thought out and consistant, the dialogue was great and the work was very descriptive overall. I liked the impromptu feel of it, the impulsiveness made it anything but predictable. Just so you know, I marked Strap-on day on my calendar.
Lucky, as always, you know how to get things moving!
Love your writting, keep it up!
Kisses,
C
Well written & full of love, emotion & fun - oh, and really hot sex!