Damn Dress: A Love Story Ch. 10

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Sienna sighed. She hated hurting his feelings. She really had appreciated him being there for her when her world was crumbling because of her crazy feelings for Brandon. But, she appreciated his friendship only. And she wished Chris would feel the same way too. "Chris, I, I love Brandon. And I probably always will. He's my soul-mate. Even if we weren't together, I'd still want him. The kind of love I feel with Brandon...I swear, you only get that once. Once you've had it, nothing else can come close. And you deserve to be loved like that."

"I know, but I think over time, you would learn to love me. Maybe not like you do him, but I know I would love you enough for the both of us. I'm a pretty good guy, you know. Even despite my behavior this summer."

"I know that, Chris, and thank you for being there for me when I needed you. Even when you saw me fall apart, you never seemed to judge me, and I'm grateful for that. I really am," Sienna stated, as she reached up to hug him.

Chris closed his eyes to remember this feeling. If he had to get tackled every day to get a hug like this, he'd gladly suffer through it.

The door suddenly flew open. "Hey Sienna, I—," Brandon started, until he saw Sienna quickly pull away from Chris. Brandon shifted his eyes back and forth between the two, until they narrowed on Chris. This kid had a fucking death wish.

Chris thanked Sienna again and quickly made an exit, squeezing past a seething Brandon. After Chris was gone, Brandon leaned against the door frame, and stared down at Sienna.

"Well, that looked cozy," Brandon said sarcastically.

"I was just helping him since you clobbered him out there," Sienna said, placing her hands on her hips.

"Well, that little fucker deserved it," Brandon said, stepping into the bathroom and placing his arms around her.

"You do know that you were being an asshole, right?"

"Yep."

"Good thing for you I like assholes," Sienna giggled, reaching up to kiss him.

Brandon kissed her back. "I don't know about that, but I do know I like your asshole." Sienna playfully slapped him. "Don't be gross!"

"I'm not. Want me to show you how much I like yours?" Brandon asked, as he kicked the bathroom door shut.

Chris walked by the bathroom and heard Sienna giggling and Brandon speaking in a low voice. It didn't take too much to imagine what was going to happen behind those doors. Chris placed his hands behind his head and exhaled. He slowly walked away from the door toward the living room, further and further away from Sienna.

Ian didn't want to wear out his welcome, so he started packing up his sound equipment. This had been a really entertaining evening. He had enjoyed talking to Sienna and Brandon's friends. His family didn't believe it the commercialization of Christmas...or organized religion, so on Christmas Day, he'd wake up, watch some TV and probably go check out a movie with a friend. But now, he'd actually have a few people he'd like to give gifts to. He was sure his parents would think it was silly, but he didn't care. Sienna was opening up his eyes to a whole new world. One he would gladly keep over his old one.

Ian walked out to his car but before he opened his car door, he heard a noise. As far as he knew, everyone was inside, but he couldn't be sure. He heard the noise again. It was coming from the side of the house. He quietly tiptoed to the corner and peered around it. He smiled and shook his head.

Around the corner, Lori and John were making out as if their lives were dependent on it. John had Lori pressed up against the siding and he was standing in between her legs. He had both of his hands plastered on her ass and his tongue shoved down her throat. Lori was moaning into his mouth.

Ian stepped back before either of them saw him and went back to his car. Well, their secret was safe with him.

Inside, Michael was lying in his mother's arms, asleep. And Tasha had almost fallen asleep herself. Darren figured it was time for them to go home. They had a lot of work to do before the big day tomorrow. He hugged Sienna and Brandon goodnight, and took Michael from Tasha, who also said her goodbyes.

Lori and John had both finally snuck back inside the house at different times, and said their goodbyes. Chris was the last to leave, hugging Sienna a little too long for Brandon's comfort.

About fifteen minutes after everyone departed, Commander Branson showed up. Sienna and Brandon had been in the middle of straightening up.

"Hey, Commander. Hate you missed the party," Brandon said, as he greeted him.

"Oh, I know. I tried to get here as soon as I could, but they held us for this damn meeting. On Christmas Eve, of all days."

"Hey daddy. We have plenty of food left, I'll wrap some up for you to take home. And Brandon and I will be over at your house tomorrow around noon, I think."

Jackson walked over to hug and kiss his daughter. She looked so beautiful. And happy, which was most important.

"Hey Brandon, can you see me out?" Jackson asked.

Brandon dumped the beer bottles in his hand in the trash. "Sure."

The two walked to the Commander's car in silence. When the Commander reached his door, he turned to Brandon. "I didn't have time to wrap this, but here you go. Merry Christmas," Jackson said, as he handed Brandon a check.

Brandon stared down at the check and his mouth dropped. THAT...was a shit load of money.

"Commander, thank you, but I can't take this," Brandon whispered to him, trying to hand the check back.

"I won't take it back. You're taking care of my daughter and my granddaughter now, and I just want to help out. I know you don't need it, but please accept this gift from your 'sorta' father."

Brandon looked up at the Commander. He shook his head in disbelief. "You know, Sienna always said it, but you really are amazing. I don't even know what to say."

"Say you accept."

"I accept. And thank you sir. This means a lot to your 'sorta' son," Brandon said, smiling at him.

Jackson leaned over and hugged Brandon. "Have a wonderful Christmas Eve, or what's left of it, and I'll see you in the morning."

"Thank you, sir. We'll see you tomorrow," Brandon replied, trying hard not to get choked up. That wasn't his style.

Brandon waited until the Commander had pulled out of the driveway and was halfway down the street before he turned and walked back in. The living room was dimmer, only barely lit by the three candles sitting on the living room table. He was about to call for Sienna, when she appeared from the hallway, casually leaning up against the wall. His mouth dropped open. Brandon couldn't believe it. She was wearing her small, peach colored, low neckline plunging dress. That dress that unleashed his feelings for her in the beginning. That damn dress that started this whole rollercoaster for them.

"I know it's a little...lot more snug than it was originally, but hopefully I still look okay in it?"

"Better," Brandon whispered, not able to take his eyes away from her.

"Liar," Sienna whispered back.

Brandon walked over to her and slowly ran his hands down the side of her body.

"Okay, before we do anything tonight, I want you to open a present of mine," Sienna said.

"Great minds think alike. I want you to open one too."

He walked her over to the couch and reached into his pocket to pull something out. Sienna held her breath. Is it a....

He pulled out a folded up piece of paper. Oh well, a girl can dream.

"Alright, sit down beautiful," he said as he handed her the folded up piece of paper.

Sienna obeyed and looked at him. He sat down beside her and waited for her to open it.

She stared down at the paper, and in the candlelight, at first she couldn't tell, but now as she looked closer, it was a light pink color. It was folded into a really small square, so she started to unfold each flap.

The larger the piece of pink paper became, the more familiar it looked. Then she realized exactly what it was. She started seeing the outline of her overly cursive girlie handwriting. It was the piece of paper she had written on and saved years ago. The paper where she had first written Sienna Rose Temple. She smiled, remembering back on that day.

She could feel Brandon's eyes on her as she got closer and closer to the center. When she finally unfolded the piece of paper from a half sheet to its full correct size, she saw directly in the middle of the page, in her eight year old handwriting were the words, 'Brandon and Sienna Temple'...but something new was underneath the writing. Taped directly below their names was a ring. The prettiest white gold diamond ring she had ever seen.

The tears immediately came and she started fanning her face.

"Will you be my wife?" she heard him whisper. Or at least that what she thought she heard. At this point, she couldn't be sure. Her entire body was tingling. Wait, if he asked her that question, she needed to respond.

"Yes," she heard herself say, even though she still felt paralyzed. "Yes!" she said again louder, and threw her arms around his neck. It felt like a dream that she never wanted to wake from. She loved him with all of her heart. Everything that she had.

Thank God, Brandon thought as he kissed her. Thank God.

"I still don't want you to feel rushed though. We can get married whenever you're ready," Brandon said, staring deeply into her eyes. "But I wanted to officially take you off the market." He slipped the ring onto her left hand ring finger and kissed it.

Sienna stared down at the stunning ring. It fit perfectly. "How did you know my size?" she asked, wiping her tears away.

Brandon smirked. "I measured it while you were sleeping."

"I can't wait to tell my father," she said, kissing Brandon again.

"He knows, baby. He helped me pick it out."

"You two, I swear...I'll have to keep my eyes on you more," Sienna laughed. She could only imagine what her dad and Brandon looked like in a jewelry shop. Two of the manliest men she knew around all of that sparkly female jewelry. She had to laugh out loud about that.

"I couldn't believe how tiny your fingers were. Your engagement ring barely fits on my pinky finger."

Sienna stared down at it. Engagement ring. Okay, now it was time for his gift.

"Okay sweety, your turn." Sienna got up to fish underneath the tree for Brandon's gift. When she found it, she turned and handed it to him. Then she got behind him on the couch, one leg on one side and the other leg on the other side of him. She wrapped her hands around his waist and rested her head on his back.

Brandon stared down at the large manila envelope. 'What the hell?' he thought.

He started to open the envelope when he heard Sienna speak behind him.

"Okay, I know you said that you don't have any pictures of yourself when you were a baby, and I wasn't able to find any. But hopefully, in time, these will make up for that loss."

Brandon slid a folder out of the envelope. He slowly opened the folder and froze.

Inside the folder were large glossy black and white photos of their baby's sonogram. The first pictures of her. He could see the entire outline of Brienna's tiny body. His heart felt like it was swelling with so many emotions. Then he felt that not-so-familiar sting at the back of his eyes. He felt like he couldn't breathe. No one could ever give him a more precious gift. He may have had an awful childhood, but he would be damn sure that his daughter would live the opposite life. No matter what it took, he would make sure of that.

Sienna's face was tightly pressed against Brandon's back, and their daughter nestled safely between them. She could feel him breathing, and then his breathing changed. It became more staggered, and then she heard him sniffing. She knew at this point not to say anything. Brandon hated showing emotion like this, so she let him have his moment as if she weren't there.

Sienna closed her eyes and exhaled. She realized in that instant that her mind and body were tired. But it was a good tired. A tiredness that came from an intense summer and fall. A tiredness caused by a long, hard semester that ended with straight A's. A tiredness due to how demanding Brandon was emotionally and physically. And a tiredness that came from being six months pregnant with their baby.

Yes, she was exhausted. But she knew later tonight, when they were both lying in bed, Brandon would wrap his arms around her and she would fall into a quick, deep sleep. That was her favorite place to be. In his arms. As long as she was there, she knew she was safe and loved. But she also knew that a small smile would form at the corners of her mouth as she slept. That involuntary smile would be all the proof either of them would need, to know exactly how blissful her life was. Perhaps her life wasn't perfect. She and Brandon had certainly had some ups and downs. Their paths had crossed in one crazy, frenzied summer. Some would even think she was downright insane for taking this particular path. But for Sienna Rose Branson, soon-to-be Temple, she knew the journey she was taking with Brandon was just the beginning... and she would gladly follow him to wherever that took them.

The End...for now;-)

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Thank you all so much for taking this journey with me on my first story. You have no idea how much I've appreciated the feedback. Many nights I was so tired, but I'd re-read all of the amazing comments that were posted or sent to me, and that would keep me going strong. Really, thank you soooooo much. Some of you made comments on almost every single chapter (and I know who you are) and I greatly appreciate the support. I promise, I'll have Damn Dress published with some new scenes and detail, and I'll be releasing the first chapter of my new story, Seven Days, very soon on Literotica. Hope you will enjoy that one as well:-)

Would like to thank Kaia B. (TangledinYou) and J for supporting my first story...much appreciated!

Thanks!

Soular

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Comentarista82Comentarista824 days ago

No doubt the happily ever after will please nearly everyone, although I imagine there might be a few grumpy people that would complain because the story ends when Sienna is 6 months pregnant, and we never get to see her deliver Brienna, much less Brandon hold her and experience what fatherhood is really like for the first time. But overall, I don't think anybody can fault how the story ended.

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Can't say Harold visiting thrilled me, but how you spun it to demonstrate Brandon's growth by not killing him instantly, that was pretty special. No story has to resolve every last problem, as life is never that neat, nor does it afford US the opportunities even to correct things that we wished we could have fixed.

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It was about high time that Brandon tackled the snot out of Chris for being such a jackass so many different ways, and while I enjoy the idea of Sienna forgiving him, Chris really stepped in way too many piles of dog crap to be forgiven and held in any kind of esteem. I would certainly argue Chris holding a candle for Sienna was probably the weakest link of the story, because it made no sense when the story cemented Sienna would only ever love Brandon and only ever have eyes for him. Perhaps there's a few people here and there that might find something redeeming about Chris pining for Sienna... but really it's just a very unneeded trope because even when you discount the suffering Sienna and Brandon experience because of each other, Chris is just kind of hanging around and no one really quite knows what to do with him.

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Probably the cutest way to wrap this up was how you chose to execute it, which was to use the same peach dress that she actually reflected about if it was smart to have used it and she came to the conclusion that it was the only way to get Brandon to see her as a woman and not a kid sister. So to close with it where it's now something to cement the relationship and not create division proved such a marvelous idea.

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I truly wish that you would return to writing, but according to your profile, you're dealing with several of your works having been pirated onto Amazon without your consent. I hope you can resolve that in some way and come back, because the interracial category could really use a high-quality author like you, that knows how to write intelligent stories that fire the imagination yet develop the characters equitably and finds a way to resolve all of the different story threads reasonably. In the 16 years since this story first appeared, the few quality authors that used to be in here submitting on a regular basis have been absent for a long time, and a lot of what's published in here anymore is just plain drivel. That needs to change and you might be able to help spark that change if you can come back. I would love to see it, because when writing perseveres for 16 years and endures to the point that it's more relevant after 16 years...that's something that very few authors can say about their work. You can. 5

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

thanks so much for writing this great story! not to be greedy but will there ever be a lori and john story?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Darren was right about the Lakers. Celtics also haven't won a championship since

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This author should definitely publish this book on Amazon. Great storyline the characters are amazing and relatable..A winner in my book…

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a great story, amongst he very best I have read on this site and I am amazed that this is the author's first effort. Well done.

6King6Kingalmost 2 years ago

Kinda hangin' at the end. ⭐⭐⭐⭐

LivelovecumLivelovecumalmost 2 years ago

I love your work. Thank you for writing.

dreababydreababyover 2 years ago

I hope you see this but this story as well as Seven Days are on Amazon Kindle under the name Bustee Wilde. The stories are almost verbatim. Damn Dress the main character names have changed. Seven Days nothing had changed. I just don't want someone to profit off of your great stories that you let us read for free.

No1_OfConsequenceNo1_OfConsequenceover 2 years ago

I held my comments to the last part of the story. So here goes.

SEALs require a level of self-discipline that is almost super human. Yes, they can cut loose on liberty like no other, and yeah, there is the occasional dumb ass that somehow makes it through the training and gets a Budweiser. But those are few and far between. SEALs work in teams of eight, and platoons of sixteen. Operations that require onesy/twosy deployments are handled by the Army SF detachment that doesn't exist (cough Delta, cough) rather than SEALs. People with anger issues don't make good operators. They get themselves killed rather quickly, and if everyone is lucky, only they get themselves killed.

SEALs do use SIGs, but not the M-11/SIG 228. They use SIG 226/MK25s, various 1911 models, and certain Glocks on occasion if you're one of the "special" SEALs. Unstable personalities can make for good storytelling, but lousy SEALs.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literatealmost 3 years ago

Great story soular. Looking forward to your next addition on Lori and John. Best wishes. To bad this writer and others have faded into the dunset so to speak.

NONCONLuvNONCONLuvalmost 3 years ago

I'm finding this story 13 years later, I have to say that I finished reading it but I keep going back to the wonderful characters. I hope you come back, Dear Soular, because I need more BT!!!

I'd love to see BT handle his daughter dating, to watch the Commander gloat and Darrien and Tasha laughing at his frustrations, of course, Sienna continuing to keep him calm. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is one of the best stories on this site. I have reread it many times. It is worth publishing. You are a talented writer. Please continue writing. We are all hoping for updates or new stories. Keep on writing. You have an appreciative audience.

Ginger630Ginger630over 3 years ago

I freaking ADORED this story!!!!! So much drama. So much love. And a happy ending. Well, the romantic kind lol!!!!

I would love to see where Lori and John go. And Ian. And even Chris, the little shit. Ooh and maybe a story about Darren & Tasha and how they met.

You’re an amazing writer. Keep it up!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Make it a Come back!

I remembered when I first came across this years ago and I just couldn’t put it away the same goes for Seven Days; just loved theses two. Like always I want the continuation of Damn Dress and Seven days. Pretty Please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Still Amazing

Please write more! Between 7 days, damn dress and the unfinished Gabrielle, we need more content!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
loving the damn dress

Woooooooooooooooooow this is a great piece good work, that's work well done. Can't wait for more

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