by gauchecritic
Mr. Gauche: I larfed and larfed. Hilarious, riotously. You've made so many wonderful bits of wit: wroyal wrath, Planet 9, an hundred, the minute and a huff etc., all of Glinda's arrivals. Hermione the hermaphrodite was a fine touch. I daresay feminists will love you.
And for the strokers: I even had moments of twat glistening.
- Perdita
Very enjoyable, Mr. Critic, had me squirmin in my seat and gigglin me arse off. A little eye rolling, but that is to be expected.
Chortled my way through it, with the occasional revisit to be sure you really said that --most of those were followed by a groan.
Overall, A-. Very nice work.
Ms Gauche, this is an hoot!
("an"? nobody says an, it's a damn consonant!)
seriously, this is the third story of yours I've read, and you're right- modesty is unnecessary here.
I like the sense of place- your dialogue is in a natural voice (and quite silly in this one)
I'll be reading more!
i loved it. ik have read stories of rrh, you know red, but this of sb is better.USA
That was great. It was funny and erotic. If I wasn't getting turned on, I was giggling. I look forward to reading more of your stories.