All Comments on 'Gateway To Pleasure'

This was the hottest and most original story I have read on this site. Awesome sex and it just kept cumming. Thank you for an incredible ride.

ALL OF HER STUFF IS GREAT BUT THIS ONE WILL MAKE HER FAMOUS.

THIS STORY KEEPS YOU GLUED TO IT,YOU CAN'T GET AWAY.

IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THIS ONE YET YOU BETTER GO TAKE A LOOK.

PEOPLE LIKE HER MAKE THIS SITE SO TEMPTING.

LITEROTICA LUCKED OUT WITH THIS WRITER.

THANKS GREEN GEM, I TRULY ENJOYED THIS ONE.

WE WANT MORE!!!!

An impressive and well crafted story that kept me enthralled until the last word. I can see why it was voted best story in the voyeur category for 2003. Congratulations and I will be looking out for more from you.

Beautifully written, I couldn't put it down.

This is, by far, the best of your stories yet, Green Gem. I loved it and was fascinated and turned on the entire way through. I can only hope that you will choose to write more about The Retreat! Perhaps a series with different visitors to the resort? Can't wait to read the rest of your work.

wow...original, well written, smart, excellent dialogue...you're a writer of real talent.

thanks,

hugh

You have such asoft and erotic touch that your writing becomes reality. Thank you for an extraordinary time

I'm speechless with admiration! ~Imp

oh my god! this is an amazing story. I don't know if there is anything that is more stimulating than this story. I am extremely impressed with this writing. please continue to write and get yourself published off the internet if you haven't already

...satisfyingly original and erotic! Thank you for writing such a well-developed, well-drawn character-driven story. I sit here throbbing, daring myself to read more of your work but scared to do so for fear of being unable to bear it.

Again, thank you!

Oh my god, that was an amazing story!

Your story was amazing. I didn't want to stop reading and just sat and stared at the screen when it was over. I felt like you were telling me the story personally, please keep writing and writing and writing!

Possibly the best story I have ever read on Literotica and I have been reading for years.

I cabt belive how this story hooked me in. It was an amazing piece of work. I have only started reading literotica recently but I am going to make sure the other stories I read are as good as this one. Thank you so much.

Well written, hot, well-drawn characters, hot, inventive setting and plot, hot, sweet description and, did I mention hot?

I can see I'm alone in this opinion, but didn't things move really fast? The doctor shows them a few minutes of porn and jade suddenly wants to fuck them both at the same time? She just leaps off the couch and strips and does them both. What the heck?

I want to say all kinds of wonderful things about this story, but all I can manage to get out is... WOW!!

Truth be told, some of the acts described in the story (double penetration, something like fisting, etc) would normally leave me a bit put off, but the flow of the story, the great description and the sheer hotness of it all, just carried me into it.

Great story. I hope you write many more and I look forward to reading your work regularly.

- JT

i just love the characters. You have to write a part 2 to this story. It feels incomplete. Please do explore this storyline further. Can't wait to read more about jade and warren, even kevin

brilliant story

An amazing story, the detail was fantastic and it almost brought a tear to my eye when it became apparent that Warren was married. Being the true romantic that I am I would have loved to have seen the story end with them together, but the ending you wrote was also very good.

What a completely engrossing story. I could easily picture every sex act and wishing I were there!

I loved this story. Got I had a spontaneous orgasm while reading it. I would love to see you develop this into a series of stories, with the ultimate ending Jade & Kevin finding sexual bliss together!

Please keep expanding this story.

even though I gave it a 5 for its eroticism, this story has a flaw in that if the doctor were taping their room, he would have known that they were not a married couple. Actually any psychologist would have figured it out. Wait ... maybe he did know.

Fantastic erotic story,pushed all my buttons, made you one of my favourite's. 5*'s

Thank you

Made me want to jump right in! 5 Stars

Love this story. Would be awesome if in a sequel, they could disguise themselves, go back to the retreat and bust the case. Very hot. My pussy's still juicing up from your story!

An excellently written and very original storyline. You have real talent.

Like the writing style, evident of a woman's touch. Unbridled passion sure carries a story! Looking forward to more stories.

WOW!! I couldn't keep my hands off my clit and outta my hot, wet, dripping pussy while I read this!! It was an awesomely well written hot fucking story!! The writer definitely knew how to keep my attention!! It was actually one of the steamiest I've read lately!! Kudos to the author!! Hope you write some more!!

Woww! Amazing story telling! The description of Jade taking two cocks into her vagina together exactly matches my wife's description of when she tried that before we met. Same positions, same feelings. Right down to how the two men described their cocks moving inside of her and cumming. So I know your story is accurate. Not many authors get this right: the two cocks have to be one above the other, not side-by-side.